Comments for Things I Said Once http://www.weslawrence.com Oh Man Tue, 07 Sep 2010 02:35:35 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 Comment on Action Movie (cont) by Meg http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=38&cpage=1#comment-248 Meg Sat, 07 Feb 2009 00:40:51 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=38#comment-248 Who's the voice in that third paragraph? I think this section's a little rougher than the last two, though you've got some great pieces, it doesn't flow quite as well. Looking forward to the next section Who’s the voice in that third paragraph? I think this section’s a little rougher than the last two, though you’ve got some great pieces, it doesn’t flow quite as well. Looking forward to the next section

]]> Comment on Action Movie (cont) by Meg http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=37&cpage=1#comment-237 Meg Wed, 04 Feb 2009 19:58:05 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=37#comment-237 Love that second paragraph Love that second paragraph

]]> Comment on Action Movie by Meg http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=36&cpage=1#comment-197 Meg Mon, 02 Feb 2009 06:16:26 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=36#comment-197 I had almost forgotten how amusingly vague your writing is. Love the last line. I had almost forgotten how amusingly vague your writing is. Love the last line.

]]> Comment on Each Cut is a Little Deeper by Ken http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=35&cpage=1#comment-90 Ken Tue, 23 Dec 2008 19:55:39 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=35#comment-90 Kinda reminded me of listening in on a phone conversation and only hearing one person talk. Kinda reminded me of listening in on a phone conversation and only hearing one person talk.

]]> Comment on Stern Face by mike http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=33&cpage=1#comment-83 mike Fri, 21 Nov 2008 22:58:06 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=33#comment-83 Quite unnerving, actually, this rain of destruction, to reign in the would-be niceness, tidiness and peace of my rationality. I love the imagery of the water and the rain. I enjoyed this. Quite unnerving, actually, this rain of destruction, to reign in the would-be niceness, tidiness and peace of my rationality.

I love the imagery of the water and the rain.

I enjoyed this.

]]> Comment on Tell it Like it Is by mike http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=34&cpage=1#comment-82 mike Wed, 19 Nov 2008 22:47:24 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=34#comment-82 Tell it like it is. "Like" being the key idea. My observations, my conclusions... all the language and abstractions... all can be nothing more than simile. Smile...simile you/i are already gone. Good job, I like the poem. "Like" being the key idea..... Tell it like it is. “Like” being the key idea. My observations, my conclusions… all the language and abstractions… all can be nothing more than simile. Smile…simile
you/i are already gone.

Good job, I like the poem. “Like” being the key idea…..

]]> Comment on Stern Face by Meg http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=33&cpage=1#comment-70 Meg Thu, 18 Sep 2008 16:59:47 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=33#comment-70 Hasn't changed a bit, your writing... still gives me a little smile Hasn’t changed a bit, your writing… still gives me a little smile

]]> Comment on I Could Always Change by Olaf http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=8&cpage=1#comment-52 Olaf Mon, 25 Aug 2008 05:05:04 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=8#comment-52 Mersi boku. Beautiful site. I'll become <a href="http://bride-makeup.ru" rel="nofollow"></a>your regular reader and subscribe on RSS. Mersi boku. Beautiful site. I’ll become your regular reader and subscribe on RSS.

]]> Comment on Heartbeat Beside Your Own by Rob http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=26&cpage=1#comment-44 Rob Mon, 23 Jun 2008 23:23:09 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=26#comment-44 Wes, I hadn't checked out this page, but I saw it on the Facebook (another place I never look) and wow. This is really good stuff. I especially liked the line about warm air on cool glass; very good visual. I'll enjoy checking this page out more regularly. Wes, I hadn’t checked out this page, but I saw it on the Facebook (another place I never look) and wow. This is really good stuff. I especially liked the line about warm air on cool glass; very good visual. I’ll enjoy checking this page out more regularly.

]]> Comment on Pip’s Pools by Wes http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=23&cpage=1#comment-24 Wes Mon, 14 Apr 2008 16:22:06 +0000 http://www.weslawrence.com/?p=23#comment-24 So not bad? So not bad?

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